tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3809403421138271575.post6450905892218589526..comments2023-08-26T02:29:08.276+12:00Comments on Seini-Mino: Show Not TellPES Blog Archivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03346754417165409248noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3809403421138271575.post-2139407796161425182012-04-30T09:04:10.032+12:002012-04-30T09:04:10.032+12:00Hey Mino,
What a great way of describing your tr...Hey Mino, <br /><br />What a great way of describing your trip down the hydro-slide. I enjoyed reading this because it was very entertaining and also very creative. I love the way you described what was happening at that moment very precisely. Anyways, keep up the good work. <br /><br />MubbaMubasshirahttp://pesmubasshiram.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3809403421138271575.post-37519032197666808812012-03-23T11:02:15.321+13:002012-03-23T11:02:15.321+13:00Hey Mino - I'm loving the writing I have been ...Hey Mino - I'm loving the writing I have been seeing on your blog lately!. This is a great description of your journey down the water slide I love the variety of vocab you used to capture the essence of this experience. Keep tweaking and recrafting. <br />Nice job Mino Mrs NuaToni Nuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06403667208848431253noreply@blogger.com