Thursday, May 10, 2012

Show Not Tell


Splish, splosh, droplets of water were summoned upon me from the sky.  Cars came one by one, sending showers of spray flying, dousing my face with water.As I trudged through the drizzling droplets, I was starting to become saturated.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Mino,

    I liked your Show not tell post especially the vocabulary in your paragraph. keep up the incredible work.

    Your Sincerely Jarna

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