Friday, July 20, 2012

Precious McKenzie

Precious McKenzie the weightlifter, was preparing himself mentally for the final lift. The weight of the bar showed no mercy and brought tension to his body.  As muscles grew taunt his veins were bulging, with struggle to continue. reaching towards the end he was determined to succeed.


Sylvia and Jarna accompanied me on completing these paragraphs.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Mino,

    Great writing. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the part where you said 'As muscles grew taunt his veins were bulging, with struggle to continue.'. I also loved the great vocabulary you used. Anyways, great work.

    -Mubba

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