Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Narrative - Orientation

Today we had to write a narrative (only the orientation). We had to write about the picture below.
Here is what I produced this morning :

Petrified with fear of the British soldiers, I hid amongst the many trees. I soon grew weary of them, just waiting for them to pass one by one. Trying not to breath heavily, I came to realize there was no more than the sound of silence, but the wind howling in the great dim sky.

1 comment:

  1. WOW! Great orientation Seini-Mino! You really hooked in your audience and I am definitely looking forward for more of this narrative! Your writing is getting better every time! GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP!

    From Gloria


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